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Writing: The quality of writing is good, consistent and with its own flair. A few hiccups and typos, but nothing that would break the immersion. Overall its pretty decent and feels like it would be polished even more over time.Updates: So far the updates have been consistent and the chapter length does not wary over the updates which is a plus. consistency is good.Story: A bit confusing in the start, especially since we start with the Girl's POV while the summary mentions it to be a MALE MC story, but give it a few chapters for the mystery and plot to settle in. Gets better and intriguingCharacter design: My comments over the various chapters will display how I feel about this. If you can make a reader hate your characters based on their interactions, that means a good job. World Background: This seems almost good, but could be better. Or rather I would say, the way its been put out for the readers needs a little more explanation. But maybe more will be explained as I read further. Overall: A good story so far, definitely worth a read.Score: 4.9

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Talent of the Doomed is a unique novella in its genre. This is a short story about how a mediocre young man survives in a dark fantasy world shrouded in mystery and darkness. With each future chapter, you will better understand the lore of this world.

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Matthew was then taken away to met his troops most of them where the ones he fought with down in klendatuh. They all saw him and quickly saluted him, he quickly found his own room and got ready for some R&R.

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